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Memories
Contributed by
jesusofholland
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Saturday, 30th May 2009 @ 10:59:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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We've made love to each other hundreds of times
Yet I only remember a handful
And the nights when we cried, held each other so tight
Have all blurred into one and the same
The taste of your lips, movement of your hips
They've faded with each passing day
But of all of the memories I've tried to forget
How I hurt you just won't go away
There was once a time I could say you were mine
When forever renewed every day
Then I came home to you after being untrue
And my eyes were reflections of shame
I saw when you cried that you knew I had lied
Each drop an expression of pain
And of all of the memories I've tried to forget
Those tear drops will not go away
You once said to me that your love wasn't free
And required I give you the same
I was wrong to assume in your heart you'd leave room
For a man who could hurt you again
You've made a new life without me by your side
Now I'm left with the burden of blame
So for all of the memories I've tried to forget
My regret will just not go away.
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Re: Memories
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by The_Young_Poet on
Saturday, 30th May 2009 @ 08:54:43 PM AEST
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| this was really good, with the rhyming and the meaning of it. nice job. |
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Re: Memories
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by musicrox13 on
Saturday, 30th May 2009 @ 09:24:26 PM AEST
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| really liked it. nice rhyming. keep writing |
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Re: Memories
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by kye on
Sunday, 31st May 2009 @ 06:49:20 AM AEST
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Oh my, your poem hits straight to the heart. I was moved by your honesty, humiliaty, regret & wisdom.
By the second stanza, I was reaching for kleenex. I felt a connection to this poem. I to, have regrets but never in a million years could I have composed a poem that would pull strongly, very strongly, at the heart of a reader.
This is my favorite poem of the day.
Kie |
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Re: Memories
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 31st May 2009 @ 08:07:25 AM AEST
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I saw this poem recommend by kye in the Best Poem of the Day forum and yep, I agree with everything she said.
Take care,
Tim |
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Re: Memories
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by elle on
Sunday, 31st May 2009 @ 07:17:50 PM AEST
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I can relate to this very delicate matter. . . the pain, the lose & the never ending
feelings that just won't go away. Truly a wonderful, heartfelt write. peace. elle |
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