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Asphyxiate
Contributed by
spaceotter
on
Wednesday, 31st July 2002 @ 01:40:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Hot, deep, red- glowing embers.
Glowing embers, red, in the back of my mind.
Reminding me of the passion,
Red, embers...
In the back of my mind.
Selfishly you play this game,
This game you know I can't win!
Just let it stop!!
let the pain stop.
Cold, gray, dying embers,
Dying embers, gray, in the back of my mind.
Realizing I need them, the embers are gone.
Dying in the back of my mind.
Turning to poison they strike deep to my
blood.
Speeding to my heart, my mind, my lungs.
Soon I asphyxiate, choking on the bitterness
of my memories.
Copyright ©
spaceotter
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2002-07-31 13:40:51]
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Re: Asphyxiate
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Thursday, 1st August 2002 @ 06:33:24 AM AEST
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| I like the colorfulness of this poem, even though the colors are in dark shades. How many times have we choked on sour memories??? Keep it up... and if you like dark poetry... check mine out =) |
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Re: Asphyxiate
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by fancyface4898 on
Wednesday, 30th October 2002 @ 10:31:15 PM AEST
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| That was deep. You can tell there was pain. I am glad I read it |
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Re: Asphyxiate
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by lilch4ever on
Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 12:43:45 AM AEST
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| Very deep and nice write, creative too. |
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