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Farewell my fictional love

Contributed by MissTeenSuicide on Saturday, 30th May 2009 @ 03:07:43 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished

It feels like a cut in me, a gash
Every time I think of you
Like being given a snapping lash
For every memory, that was a dream come true

I want to forget ever knowing you
It tortures me to see you smile
I know you've already forgotten me, too
My happiest moments, lasted but a while

I know you couldn't care any less
I know you've found better, the best
I know I was just to keep you busy
But was any of it real to you? How about, maybe, me?

I hate myself for allowing this
Another tragedy, another wreck, another love amiss
You crept in close, and so it is
I allowed you to play me the fool in this

Trying again would be bad, I agree
Because now, through your lies, I finally see
I was but a substitute, a way to kill time free
I am worthless, naive, disposable,
me

These memories shall haunt me forever
These 'dreams' have been quite sly
You revealed the truth, they're nightmares
But now its too late, time has gone by.

Copyright © MissTeenSuicide ... [ 2009-05-30 03:07:43]
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Re: Farewell my fictional love (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlightKiss on Monday, 23rd November 2009 @ 09:09:58 AM AEST
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:( :( :(
This was good though, I loved the
second to last stanza

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