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Blue Eyes
Contributed by
windowguy
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Saturday, 30th May 2009 @ 12:10:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Like liquid sapphires
Attracting my loving gaze
Your eyes steal my heart.
Copyright ©
windowguy
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2009-05-30 00:10:28] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Blue Eyes
(User Rating: 1 ) by haiku4fun on
Saturday, 30th May 2009 @ 09:58:54 AM AEST (User
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i really like the first line! good job |
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Re: Blue Eyes
(User Rating: 1 ) by musicrox13 on
Saturday, 30th May 2009 @ 09:34:00 PM AEST (User
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i really liked it. good write |
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