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My Only Dream
Contributed by
Balmain_Tiger
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Friday, 29th May 2009 @ 04:06:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
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With more than words to show you how I feel
But towards me your heart is like steel
Not cold but tempered firm and hard
Where emotions for love are simply barred
And still you remain soft and nice
And continue to show your sugar and spice
To see you happy what more could there be
I’d walk over mountains and cross the sea
Is there nothing I can do to make things right
Or forever do I endure my sleepless night
With only a dream in my heart
A special dream I can never part
Saturday, 30 May 2009
08:58:25
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Re: My Only Dream
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 29th May 2009 @ 04:30:50 PM AEST
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some good metaphors in this, great work.
-Phil |
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Re: My Only Dream
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by VR2776 on
Friday, 29th May 2009 @ 05:15:37 PM AEST
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| This is great I can feel the yearning....this hits close to home great stuff.... |
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Re: My Only Dream
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by HearMeOut on
Friday, 29th May 2009 @ 07:39:32 PM AEST
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| I agree, the literature devices are strong. Good piece. |
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Re: My Only Dream
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by musicrox13 on
Friday, 29th May 2009 @ 08:37:36 PM AEST
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| good read. great metaphors. keep writing. |
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Re: My Only Dream
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by kye on
Saturday, 30th May 2009 @ 12:20:16 PM AEST
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Your poem is one( that not only) calls to the heart that has known love, but, it calls to the masses. It is a special poem and one that you should value. It is wonderful.
Kie ***** |
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Re: My Only Dream
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 9th June 2009 @ 06:30:41 PM AEST
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My very favourite of all your poems so far, Peter..... Well done..
Jenni |
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