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Double Faced Coin
Contributed by
darkkai
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Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 06:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Damaged my world was when we met,
Intense your presence was when we talked.
Now we are apart
Haunted i am by the past
Another comes, place is taken.
younger than I, Same like you.
Happy than miserable,
I chose this one over you
thier likeness uncanny,
physique, eyes, and life.
busy and sexy.
Such confusion, Impossible concentraion.
my heart is torn by past and present alike.
Copyright ©
darkkai
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2003-03-27 18:45:00]
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Re: Double Faced Coin
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by karoody on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 07:02:45 PM AEST
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matters of the heart can get confusing. good luck to you. good write by the way.
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Re: Double Faced Coin
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 10:17:18 PM AEST
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good write
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Re: Double Faced Coin
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 29th March 2003 @ 02:31:30 AM AEST
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good poem very realistic and being single is good sometimes. Hope to see more from ya.
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