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Fall from Glory
Contributed by
kels497
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Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 05:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Forever more shall darkness rise
And crush the crumbling forlorn cries
And silence all the dying sighs
Of those who came before
All the valiant heroes slain
With their blood the streets are stained
The gastly stench curls up in vain
As seraphs fall to the floor
Orphans wander through the street
Looking for love they'll never meet
As death takes its almighty seat
The throne which it hath tore
Purity now succumbs to sin
Evil finally destined to win
Death himself sports a groteque grin
That tells of unspeakable gore
Copyright ©
kels497
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2003-03-27 17:45:00]
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Re: Fall from Glory
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 07:00:14 PM AEST
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This was good very dark I loved the imagry the last stanza was a bit confusing, but I loved it. Great poem.
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Re: Fall from Glory
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 10:26:36 PM AEST
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very good write
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Re: Fall from Glory
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 05:31:22 AM AEST
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Great poem. I like the darker poetry.
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Re: Fall from Glory
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 11:18:19 PM AEST
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Nice and dark, with an evil twist.
Great read, I love dark poetry. |
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Re: Fall from Glory
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by Wrybod on
Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 06:44:30 PM AEST
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K497
Almost fits the tune "Scotland shall be free" j
Stumbles on the lilt here and there but
I don't suppose you know the tune
Very good uncompromising sentiment. Strong stuff!
On the same theme try my latest "The first and last commandment" |
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Re: Fall from Glory
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by Niceguysfinishlast on
Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 12:29:55 AM AEST
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| shows a good view of hopelessness |
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