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Blood For Sleep

Contributed by lostrelic on Thursday, 28th May 2009 @ 11:10:26 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

I pictured a flash in the past, a vision of my future, the one i share today.
She held her heart to me, long moments to share.
We were in the sun, the children playing at her feet,
the dogs barked in their pact hunting for the prey.

She brought the mother, i held the destroyer, we mixed in different social situations.
The wind was right, the stars they danced within me right.
We called the heavens down, laughing as we played in the fields of death, like scorned lovers.
Gently mocking the sands of change, forcing the tune of now.

The people gathered to hear the anger, to wonder at the sun.
Moving like waves they swayed with each syllable, in death we are one.
Progress began as the walls started to fall, to much in such a little time, to much for small little minds.
Blind and with no will we will harvest the dream, building walls that are formed without seam.

Without her my dream will not stand, divided we fall.
A fate set in fire, divided i fall.
I whispered her name, when the rain stops the time will be,
I whispered her name, divided we fall

Copyright © lostrelic ... [ 2009-05-28 11:10:26]
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Re: Blood For Sleep (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 29th May 2009 @ 09:46:22 AM AEST
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where are all the comments? this is an exceptional poem and the best i've read today. the imagery was marvellous and the metaphors were well structured. great work.

-Phil

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