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Olympia “But a Dream”
Contributed by
Balmain_Tiger
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Thursday, 28th May 2009 @ 07:19:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The porch light is out it does seem
But Olympia you remain my dream
I can only but repeat
How you are a wondrous feat
Your smile remains an endless sight
That always makes it seem just right
You are simply nice in every way
Wether in anger or in play
You are smart with a vision that is true
And you live this truth in what you do
You are so beautiful that none compare
To tell you my feelings I no longer dare
My poems I write they are for you
I wish there was more I can do
Perhaps with magic I could hold your heart
I would have done this from the very start
Alas I know only true love can be real
And forever this is how I do feel
One way traffic it does seem
But Olympia you remain my dream
Thursday 28 May 2009
16:44:10
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Re: Olympia “But a Dream”
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by PoetryWriter11 on
Thursday, 28th May 2009 @ 03:38:24 PM AEST
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| hi yeah i loved it that was so beautiful i cant believe it and i can relate to it but im a girl so yeah um but yes i love it i totally understand because it feels like theres nothing more i can do for my love he means the world to me and i dont know him well but i still i dont know but yeah loved the poem very beautiful and flowing with ease. :) |
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Re: Olympia “But a Dream”
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 29th May 2009 @ 09:56:41 AM AEST
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an excellent write, well done.
-Phil |
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