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Urban Isolation
Contributed by
TeRrahiel
on
Wednesday, 27th May 2009 @ 10:33:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The wall
Hanging chains
My hands
Cannot move
Through a small window
The light comes in, burning my eyes to dust
I don't care
The rain
Is outside
My skin
Cannot feel
Blue light surrounds me
The shades around the wall keep speeding up
I don't care
Black light
Nothingness
My heart
Cannot beat...
Copyright ©
TeRrahiel
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2009-05-27 10:33:49]
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Re: Urban Isolation
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by ever1der on
Wednesday, 27th May 2009 @ 07:01:29 PM AEST
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| this makes me feel like I can't breathe ... lots of feeling. |
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Re: Urban Isolation
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by Voice of the Silent on
Thursday, 28th May 2009 @ 03:01:43 AM AEST
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Makes me think of a book I JUST got done reading
the woman was chained and couldn't move and had to nearly cut her thumb off to escape
meaning to your situation if your trapped by something or someone or simply because your trapped in your mind because you've given up do what you can to get out
anyway great write
hope to read more soon
-kelly |
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Re: Urban Isolation
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by Morrighan on
Sunday, 11th October 2009 @ 10:36:58 AM AEST
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Między światłem a ciemnością widziałam bladą twarz.
Między światłem a ciemnością spotkały się nasze oczy.
Bez słów czy gestów, tylko myśl faustowska:
"Chwilo trwaj, boś jest piękna!"
I wiedziałam, kiedy znikł,
że szaleństwo mnie ogarnia,
bo człowiekiem nie był już...
On zmarł...
(Przepraszam, nie umiem po angielsku, ale przecież wiesz, o co mi chodziło. Faust w tłumaczeniu własnym) |
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