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My Creator

Contributed by guiltycircles on Wednesday, 27th May 2009 @ 04:43:55 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

For as long as I can remember, you’ve been there
I’ve seen your ugly silhouette of deception
The smile on my face is tainted by your hands holding the strings
Pulling me to where you need your deeds performed
The lipstick smears my body
Depicting our story
Our years of bonding over hatred
The problem is I have never wavered
My loyalty to you has never faltered
Your vanishing hands hold me tight
Guiding me through the maze they lay out for me
You could let go, I would not stray
But you see the strength in the hands in the hedges
You see the power they have to tear me from you
I could not survive without your invisible influence
Life does not exist without your bladed hook
You led me to the perfect existence yet kept it out of my reach
There was a new master in that world
He is not dark like you
But I am your creation, I am your essence
I will always exist in the depths of your evil abyss
He may hold the strings now
But you hold my breath and beating heart
Yours to do with what your demonic touch wishes
I will forever be your puppet
Let me perform for you Master

Copyright Â© guiltycircles ... [ 2009-05-27 04:43:55]
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Re: My Creator (User Rating: 1 )
by Alone_in_Darkness on Thursday, 18th June 2009 @ 05:47:44 PM AEST
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Wow that was beautiful! I could really understand what you were saying and i could picture everything! Excellent Job!

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