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Blow those lies out the back of your head
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Tuesday, 26th May 2009 @ 08:59:52 PM in AEST
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I can't take full credit for this. I was listening to blow by Atreyu and the poem is from that I changed it to my own style but the two are very similar. So I can't take full credit for the poem
Blow those lies out the back of your head
Keep it secret until we’re dead
Think of all the time we could save
If you keep those lies until you hit the grave
Because the lies never last
Put them in the past
Store them in the back of your brain
To keep from driving me insane
I’ve heard it all from hypocrite
To the critics all
Lies are back in style
And while I listen while
It’s seems to real
No matter what you feel
No matter what you say
Your lies won’t drive me away
So blow the lies out the back of your head
Keep your secret until we’re dead
Just think of the time you’ll save
Just keep your lies with you until you hit the grave
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Re: Blow those lies out the back of your head
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 26th May 2009 @ 09:31:59 PM AEST
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Good work my friend.
I don't tolerate to much either.
Huggs, blessing,
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Re: Blow those lies out the back of your head
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 26th May 2009 @ 11:04:30 PM AEST
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Kelly, I am going to put this as nicely and as p/c as I can. Isn't cleaning up something and rewriting / rearranging lines written by someone else and calling it your own (even if you give them credit) just plain wrong? Speaking of wrong, I know I am wrong all the time but this just doesn't seem right to me. But then again, I could be wrong myself.
Sorry, but I had to say it and I know at least one other person besides me is going to be thinking it too.
Take care,
Tim
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