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Inside
Contributed by
mamasmurf
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Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 03:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Bottled up inside
Are the words I never said,
The feelings that I hide,
he lines you never read.
You can see it in my eyes,
Read it on my face:
Trapped inside are lies
Of the past I can't replace.
With memories that linger-
Won't seem to go away.
Why can't I be happier?
Today's a brand new day.
Yesterdays are over,
Even though the hurting's not.
Nothing lasts forever,
I must cherish what I've got.
Don't take my love for granted,
For soon it will be gone-
All you ever wanted
Of the love you thought you'd won.
The hurt I'm feeling now
Won't disappear overnight,
But someway, somehow,
Everything will turn out all right,
No more wishing for the past.
It wasn't meant to be.
It didn't seem to last,
So I have to set him free.
Copyright ©
mamasmurf
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2003-03-27 15:45:00]
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Re: Inside
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 07:06:04 PM AEST
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Great poem Carey Ann
Yesterdays are over,
Even though the hurting's not.
Those 2 lines hit me hard I think we all can relate to this a bit the lies and hurt we hold inside.
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Re: Inside
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 10:37:47 PM AEST
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| This is a great write ... I enjoyed your poem ... looking forward to reading more from you ... Jan |
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Re: Inside
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 05:08:39 AM AEST
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What a fantastc poem. I think a lot of people can relate to this. Beautifully written.
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Re: Inside
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by yellow_sundragon on
Wednesday, 30th April 2003 @ 01:54:52 AM AEST
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I am in love with this poem. Really. It's beautifully written.
"No more wishing for the past.
It wasn't meant to be."
I know those two lines. Thanks for sharing.
YS |
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