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The Grass is Greener
Contributed by
letssaymike
on
Monday, 25th May 2009 @ 03:16:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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A flower blooms,
Into a beautiful thing,
In which the grass is green,
And the birds do sing.
Yet a different set of eyes,
Can deem these to be weeds,
Where the grass is not adorned with fate,
And songs met with hate.
The grass is greener on the other side.
But
Just place your eyes,
On the space you reside,
Another look,
With another set of eyes
And you may just see,
The grass is greener on your side.
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letssaymike
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2009-05-25 15:16:25]
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Re: The Grass is Greener
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by kye on
Tuesday, 26th May 2009 @ 03:07:58 PM AEST
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I liked your poem. I thought it was fast moving with a good flow. It also had wisdom, just enough to make you think...
A person once said (and I can't remember whom) that weeds were only flowers waiting to bloom. Your poem reminded me of this.
One thing I do know regardless of how green the grass is---it still has to be mowed.
Thank you for this enjoyable read.
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Re: The Grass is Greener
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by letssaymike on
Wednesday, 2nd September 2009 @ 04:26:13 PM AEST
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why thank you.
im glad it reads quick to a reader. Ive really tried do something with the rhythm in this poem. |
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