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You're wrong
Contributed by
HogOfTheForsaken
on
Monday, 25th May 2009 @ 06:50:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Dying for a cause so noble, in a fight we could not lose
Could you ever forgive me for making you choose?
In a war that lasted so long you could not see
The end of the beauty you once saw in me
The lure and the pull of your furtive philosophy
If only I could count the ways…..
You say you don’t believe in me when I’m here
With you, and I’ll be here long after the end of days
You can strike me down; I’ll get back up
You took from me and I couldn’t adjust
To better places said the faces I couldn’t see
Why can’t they still be where they belong with me?
I’m sure it’s trite to argue the inevitability of life
How a son loses his sister and a father his wife
But you’re so happy to have the faith and convictions
You’re blind to real life existence
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2009-05-25 06:50:18]
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Re: You're wrong
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by Faithfully_a_Wallflower on
Monday, 25th May 2009 @ 09:46:25 AM AEST
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I liked it. Very philosophical. Thought-provoking.
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Re: You're wrong
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by simsalabim on
Monday, 25th May 2009 @ 10:08:22 PM AEST
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| ride 'em fishboy. |
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