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Water Droplet on a Leaf
Contributed by
windowguy
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Monday, 25th May 2009 @ 12:27:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Safely nestled
like a crystal ball
on a green baize surface,
it gleams, invitingly.
Sunlight catches its surface
and it winks back at me
as if to say:
“Study me closer
for a little while
and you won't
be disappointed."
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windowguy
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2009-05-25 00:27:00]
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Re: Water Droplet on a Leaf
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th May 2009 @ 06:58:37 AM AEST
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Beautiful imagery. I adore the "crystal ball" reference. It's so suiting.
You place your reader inside the poem with your words. And what a
stunning place to be with this one! *sigh*
I love writes about nature and water in particular. This was is short,
but captivating and even tempting. It leaves the reader wanting more.
Great post!
~ Breezy
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Re: Water Droplet on a Leaf
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by kye on
Tuesday, 26th May 2009 @ 03:25:57 PM AEST
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I reiterate Breezy's comment!
Your poem has captured the magic found in the simplicity of a water droplet. The imagery was perfect.
Remarkable!
Kye |
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