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Cloud Creatures
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Sunday, 24th May 2009 @ 09:33:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The clouds of childhood are puffy white;
they are pillows to climb.
The ever-morphing wonders float an endless flight;
These white beings live a life in world of the sublime.
A child can witness the personality of each cloud formation;
some are rowdy; some are shy.
Clouds contain creatures of creativity and elation;
They are more than white decorations in the sky.
A child casts eyes on a cloud creature up above;
the image is a dragon breathing fire.
The dragon disappears into a realm where its beauty is loved;
the child blinks and spots an evolved creature even higher.
It is a cyclops gazing with one eye at the world below;
the eye stares down casting a spell on the child.
As the cyclops fades into a portal of cloudy snow,
the cloud creatures have transformed into something mild.
The spell on the child is death of imagination;
The cloud creatures of creativity can no longer be seen.
An adult cannot see these beings of inspiration.
Now the clouds in the sky coast calmly and serene.
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lesoleilnoire
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2009-05-24 21:33:02]
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Re: Cloud Creatures
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by Faithfully_a_Wallflower on
Monday, 25th May 2009 @ 10:04:34 AM AEST
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Very well done. I love the creativity in this poem as you develop the different things a child sees in the clouds. It is almost as if you are disproving your own idea of adults lacking imagination. It flowed very nicely for me.
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Re: Cloud Creatures
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by windowguy on
Friday, 29th May 2009 @ 09:32:36 AM AEST
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| Nice imaginative write. Like it. |
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