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Life's Photoalbum
Contributed by
Jester
on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 01:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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Perfect azure gem like eyes
now like grey stones look back
lips that once spoke rapid and musical words
they now have fallen silent
a face that once held life
now held by life's worries
hands which where once sturdy as a rock
now cannot help but tremble
sitting quietly in a dark room
a mirror his company
closing his eyes
and life flows in
flashing lights
music pumping
and the sence of searching
searching through mind and memories
to find a set of beautiful eyes looking back
smiling at the conversation
her words echoeing
do you remember
do you remember all those times we laughed
those times we cried
or when I broke down and let you inside
inside my mind
in those times I abused you
hated and accused you
all those times we fought
and of the soul we tought
the distence we've come
the lives we begun
the fear
the anger
the love, loss and lust
was it worth it
do you rememer why
do you remember me
shadows shifting and light spinning
moving further and faster beond
until eyes flicker open
and silence returns
a shaking hand reaches for his glass
his lips in a warm smile
as a tear rolls down his cheek and lingers in his stubble
a deep sigh as the drink spills like golden crystals
the fall majestically onto a thred bare carpet
laying back silently with a smile
a smile that would linger eternally
and echo forever through that empty room
never to be disturbed
as a fresh breeze of tommorrow blows
and perfect gem like eyes
they watch from the mirror
and it's lips mouth "yes i remember"
Copyright ©
Jester
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2003-03-27 13:45:00]
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Re: Life's Photoalbum
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by karoody on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 02:39:13 PM AEST
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a very powerful write. i loved it. thanx for sharing
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Re: Life's Photoalbum
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 03:04:51 PM AEST
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i agree with Kara a very powerful write..good poem
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Re: Life's Photoalbum
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by Tanna on
Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 12:07:47 AM AEST
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| This is amazing, the imagery is just fantastic! |
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Re: Life's Photoalbum
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 04:36:53 AM AEST
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This is simply beautiful. This is what poetry is all about. I REALLY enjoyed reading this. Definately one of my favourites.
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Re: Life's Photoalbum
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by Jester on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 11:15:27 PM AEST
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| Thank you Karoody, I wasn't sure how that one would go down as it it's a little different to the otehr pieces I have posted. I am glad you liked it. |
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Re: Life's Photoalbum
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by Jester on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 11:18:05 PM AEST
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:: bows:: thank you, I am not sure what else I can say I am glad the idea behind the poem was grasped I thought it might have been missed but I have been pleasently surprised. Yaay me . Hope to check your stuff soon
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Re: Life's Photoalbum
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by Jester on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 11:19:56 PM AEST
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| Lol I am starting to think you are just biast to my poems lol. ::winks:: he hejust heading to check out your new stuff be well |
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