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Sonador
Contributed by
nicole639
on
Friday, 22nd May 2009 @ 12:06:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The mid-night sun screams empathy,
Alike in our differences,
Once reality, now a dream
The sullen wind now awake within the thoughts of how it should be.
A once solitary mind now happy within itself,
The bewitching relief of an abstract world content in its acuteness.
The provisional jubilation concealing the everlasting heartache,
The delectable solace of steadily alluring memories.
Only the mid-night sun can empathise with those indefinable memories,
The detrimental alongside the harmonious.
Reluctant to escape the hope of reconciliation,
The indescribable need for this hope,
I am and always will be helplessly in love with a fiend.
Copyright ©
nicole639
... [
2009-05-22 12:06:20] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Sonador
(User Rating: 1 ) by Faithfully_a_Wallflower on
Monday, 25th May 2009 @ 10:10:39 AM AEST (User
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This was a very unique poem. I enjoyed it very much though. It feels almost existential with the overt contradictions in many lines that goes along with this sort of abstraction of thoughts and feelings. It was very deep. Well done.
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