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Your Game
Contributed by
Elipsis
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Friday, 22nd May 2009 @ 02:59:23 AM in AEST
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Taking deep breaths, I choke on the fake air
These rules you have set are simply not fair
Moving my head, my thoughts I try to sway
Your lousy game I do not wish to play
A curve ball was thrown in my direction
Then I stare at the meaning of perfection
Unaware of the ball, it smacks me out of place
Your next move is displayed all over your face
You will not get to me, I’m not your adversary
What I think and feel is not a mystery
Your game smells of anger and distress
I will not play; will not be part of your mess.
Copyright ©
Elipsis
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2009-05-22 02:59:23]
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Re: Your Game
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by Voice of the Silent on
Friday, 22nd May 2009 @ 03:30:02 AM AEST
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This one makes me smile simply because I like the flow for one but you say you don't what to play this persons game but I myself love setting up games and watching them play out. Saddly though in life we are all restricted by someones rules that are apart of their game the only good thing is that we can always break those rules
Anyway I'm rambling for I'm tired lol
Great poem
hope to read more soon
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Re: Your Game
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by lesoleilnoire on
Friday, 22nd May 2009 @ 08:27:37 PM AEST
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| Very nicely written poem. You capture the very nature of jealousy. I look forward to reading more of your writing. |
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