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heartbroken
Contributed by
hmong_dude
on
Friday, 22nd May 2009 @ 12:29:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Deceitful lies blinds the eyes,
The angel of death brings unwanted wraths,
My life full of turmoil,
The feeling of being buried alive,
Six feet under the soil,
Unbearable pain which reeks a scent of the deceased,
My heart skips multiple beats,
The day you left me on my knees,
The pain of a million deaths,
Incomparable which only exists in fantasies,
It was all like a dream so it seems,
In a quick flash I’m back into the hell that is reality,
No angels in my time, No miracles will I see
Only agony and pain,
Striking the heart like a virus with an unknown name,
Hidden from the truth with blinded eyes,
In this lifetime I will find no angel of mine,
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hmong_dude
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2009-05-22 00:29:50]
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Re: heartbroken
(User Rating: 1 )
by perfectdisaster on
Saturday, 23rd May 2009 @ 07:06:11 PM AEST
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I feel a multitude of pain in this poem.
Nicely done. |
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Re: heartbroken
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 2nd March 2014 @ 07:22:38 AM AEST
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lost love is a little death... beautifully written,
hugs n' love nessa
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