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A Sliver of Silver
Contributed by
windowguy
on
Thursday, 21st May 2009 @ 11:03:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Gently falling from
The midnight sky
A sliver of silver
Dropped into
My palm;
It began to slowly melt
Into a little silver pool
Caressing
Each fold,
Each crease;
Quiescent in quietude,
Coalescing
With the warmth
Of my hand;
There it rested.
A smile
Lit up my face
In gratitude
For this small
Gift of the Moon.
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windowguy
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2009-05-21 23:03:06]
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Re: A Sliver of Silver
(User Rating: 1 )
by Elipsis on
Friday, 22nd May 2009 @ 03:06:43 AM AEST
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| This is amazing... I love the way you see the moon and all attached. |
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Re: A Sliver of Silver
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by Voice of the Silent on
Friday, 22nd May 2009 @ 04:02:31 AM AEST
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Great poem very detailed..if only the moon did rain drops of silver from the sky
By the way you may be confusing silver with Gallium lol
anyway I had to use what I leaned in chemistry somewhere
hope to read more soon
-kelly |
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Re: A Sliver of Silver
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by Writing4Him on
Thursday, 4th June 2009 @ 08:05:53 AM AEST
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| Nice choice of words! |
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