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Comet Ride

Contributed by shanat on Wednesday, 20th May 2009 @ 10:04:03 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

All aboard, all is ready for the first comet ride
tickets please thankyou sir watch your step inside
the tops the greatest view hope you enjoy your flight
it`s an out of world experience everyone hold on tight

Blasting off, leaving the atmosphere
traveling the speed of sound to the eye can bring a tear
Fizzing past the moon leaving a white tail of satin
visit every constellation and through the rings of saturn

To your left the milkyway looks brightest in that direction
A sense of ore and wonder in every single reflection
To your right ecliptic nebula arching across the entire celestial sphere
sun shining on our faces the universe entirely crystal clear

How are you feeling? is it everything you`ve ever dreamed?
or is everything here not what it seemed?
evolving galaxies observe the twinkling nights
let the power and the warmth affect your inner sights:)

I can hear the music deep and orbiting your eyes
everyone stand together hold hands and listen to the sky`s
silence is beautiful, but i`m afraid it`s time to go
settle in your seat, back to earth, we`ll take it slow:)

I`m glad you rode with me my comet to heaven
Hope you found inner peace
Please tell everyone
the next on leaves at 7:))

Copyright © shanat ... [ 2009-05-20 22:04:03]
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