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I Long To Hold You Again
Contributed by
razorbladekisses
on
Tuesday, 19th May 2009 @ 07:27:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You speak to me with passion,
It laces your every word.
Slithering out your mouth;
So seductive to my ears.
What you say is so sweet,
It thickens the air between us,
I can almost taste it.
May I return the favor
Ever so sweet.
Though the distance,
I can feel you
All around me.
You give me a feeling,
That is forever strong;
You make me feel so special.
I hope you can see yourself
Through my eyes.
My chest grows with pride
To even think that your love
Could be mine,
It's so divine.
I become stronger
When you inject your love
Into my veins.
Can you picture it?
You and me
Hand in hand?
Together,
Once again?
Our love is so strong,
The distance is so long...
My heart pounds
Harder.
And I want you,
I want you so bad.
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2009-05-19 19:27:29]
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Re: I Long To Hold You Again
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th May 2009 @ 07:31:27 AM AEST
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This moved me. I know this emotion intimately. It is bitter sweet, no? Missing
someone so much that it hurts can break the heart so easily. There is sleepless nights
mornings of longing and endless days of dreaming .. but OH what glorious torture!
Your words wrap around this emotion so beautifully. It is enrapturing.
~ Breezy
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Re: I Long To Hold You Again
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by PreciousKitten on
Sunday, 24th May 2009 @ 03:10:07 PM AEST
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| excellent poem. this poem is love in a awesome way. |
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Re: I Long To Hold You Again
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by The_Unknown on
Friday, 16th April 2010 @ 11:12:38 AM AEST
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What an absolutely amazing poem.. It clearly captures your feelings toward this other person. It reminds me of someone in my life.
It brings the longing and desperation to have them near in full view of the reader, almost exposing.... I enjoyed this, a lot. You're such a good poet.
-T_U |
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