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Cold
Contributed by
Axios-Mortis
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Tuesday, 19th May 2009 @ 05:12:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
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cold. cold is malignant, cold can not feel
it broods, it is patient
it waits to enter your heart and soul
cold will outlast you, it is not human
when you break, cold is slow to kill, it enjoys your suffering
seeking tirelessly, seeping in deeper under your skin
its icy chill will break you down, numb your senses
you will not feel
agonizingly slow cold slithers through your shivering soul
frigid fingers wrapped around your writhing heart
colds icy dead hands capture everything
you will never break free
soul and heart frozen, mind apathetic
cold will make you wish for the death
that it is slowly delivering
you will be left a frozen wasted example
do not become cold..
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Re: Cold
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 19th May 2009 @ 06:26:25 PM AEST
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| It is interesting. Try working on a more even flow. |
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Re: Cold
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by thumper on
Tuesday, 19th May 2009 @ 07:47:37 PM AEST
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I understood this completely. Interesting flow of thought. Good work. And welcome to ypdc, it's a good place to be. ;o)
Peace to ya,
Thumper ;o) |
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Re: Cold
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by Voice of the Silent on
Wednesday, 20th May 2009 @ 09:22:10 AM AEST
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Very good poem
but I disagree I would rather be frozen cold numb to the world then to feel the pain it deals out. I perfer cold to hot any day.
anyway great poem
hope to read more soon
-kelly
Question: does your name mean something in latin? |
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