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I Remember...
Contributed by
Elipsis
on
Tuesday, 19th May 2009 @ 09:06:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I remember the hug that started it all
I remember when I made the very first call
I remember the lunchtime chat under the tree
I remember how you stared right through me
I remember your face… so close to mine
I remember the smell of Southern Comfort and Lime
I remember the rain on the city lights
I remember two very long Johannesburg flights
I remember lying in bed, playing a question game
I remember the first kiss making me feel lame
I remember making a bet on whether you would phone
I remember, since then, never feeling alone
I remember the news that sounded like the end
I remember that car that you illegally lent
I remember you going down on one knee
I remember you singing… only for me
I remember this, because it’s all about you
I remember everything, for this love is true!
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Elipsis
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2009-05-19 09:06:58] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I Remember...
(User Rating: 1 ) by MissAnnonymous on
Wednesday, 20th May 2009 @ 01:56:33 PM AEST (User
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Hi, great poem
I like the rhythm to it and obviously the words... I like the way you've put it all together. It makes me feel like I was there too, and that it was me who experienced all this.
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