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A Single Snowflake
Contributed by
windowguy
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Monday, 18th May 2009 @ 12:26:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
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One among billions
Unique silver crystal
Floating
In a turquoise sky
Until,
Its journey ends,
Pierced upon
A green blade,
Where
It slowly melts
Depositing
A unique silver tear.
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windowguy
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2009-05-18 12:26:55]
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Re: A Single Snowflake
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by elle on
Monday, 18th May 2009 @ 07:48:08 PM AEST
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| very calming. . . splendid in structure & simplicity. . . peace. elle |
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Re: A Single Snowflake
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 19th May 2009 @ 02:00:49 PM AEST
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Good imagery...
Loved this..
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Re: A Single Snowflake
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by kye on
Tuesday, 26th May 2009 @ 03:33:38 PM AEST
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I adored this poem. I have sat outside so many times in my life just to feel and look up into the snowflakes. They are just fascinating and beautiful. It's different when you see them from inside a building---you don't see the individual snowflakes as they slowly fall building to massive amounts.
I really like your nature poems and think you are extremely talented as a poet.
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