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True Love
Contributed by
theurbanpoet
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Sunday, 17th May 2009 @ 07:55:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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At the window she sits and waits,
For the return of her soul mate,
Her eyes fixed on the drive,
As she nervously waits for her lover too arrive,
Memories of their last kiss as she strokes her face,
She holds herself and feels his embrace,
Any minute now her lover will return,
And for his presence her heart will no longer yearn,
But time passes.....
Shes at the wndow, wrinkled and old,
Her tears drip onto the ring that was once a gleaming gold,
Like a waterfall the tears pour from her eyes,
She searches for answers as she screams too the skies,
"Where are you my love? Give me a sign!"
He replies with a whisper,
"I'm no longer here but your heart will always be mine".
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2009-05-17 19:55:31]
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Re: True Love
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by tothepoint on
Sunday, 17th May 2009 @ 09:51:52 PM AEST
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hey urban poet,
this was a beautiful piece you have written. it was short and sweet and could be true. |
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Re: True Love
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by TheBoyWhoStaresTooMuch on
Monday, 18th May 2009 @ 03:38:18 AM AEST
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| Having read your other pieces, i feel this one just lacks the impact your other poems have, that is not to say it isn't good, it is good, It just, for me, didnt strike me aswell as your other poems, still tho, keep up the good work |
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Re: True Love
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th October 2009 @ 09:33:47 AM AEST
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Actually this poem is quite good, not disastrous or splendid.
It's great because it happens to a lot of people, maybe not in the exact senerio or exact way as described,,,
But i thinkwe all wait sometimes,,,too long for the ones we love and its always scary
Love the way you write, creative. |
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