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loner
Contributed by
green
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Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 05:35:00 AM in AEST
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AS I WALK DOWN THIS LONG ROAD NO WHERE TO GO -NO ONE TO SEE ,JUST ME AND MY CLOTHES LONEY AND FREE.NO ONE TO CLING TOO - NO ONE TO BE .I AM A LONER,CAN U SEE ME?I WILL COME AND GO AS I PLEASE-DO YOU UNDERSTAND I AM A LONER YOU SEE BORN TO BE WILD AND FREE.
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Re: loner
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by tease_whizz on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 01:46:07 PM AEST
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| interesting style - more like a flow of thought. it might be better written in a more traditional style but what you have here is unique. 'just me and my clothes' - thats a great line, so true! hope to read more of your poetry soon, read some of mine if you like, Kate x |
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Re: loner
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by karoody on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 02:30:27 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this write and the unique way it flows like your thoughts.
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