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A Pomegranate
Contributed by
windowguy
on
Sunday, 17th May 2009 @ 07:33:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Juicy red rubies
Glint in fleshy covering
Soon to be devoured.
My pin pricks each seed
Scarlet liquid spurts once pressed
Oozing with goodness.
The sweetest flavour
Such succulent refreshment
Dancing on my tongue.
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windowguy
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2009-05-17 07:33:05]
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Re: A Pomegranate
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Sunday, 17th May 2009 @ 10:34:40 AM AEST
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This is delicious ... no pun intended. What a wonderful
descriptive piece! This is the type of write that makes
ones mouth water. The words you chose to flavour this
were perfect!
Great post!
~ Breezy
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Re: A Pomegranate
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by CMkelly on
Sunday, 17th May 2009 @ 11:30:46 AM AEST
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| this is an excellent piece. |
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Re: A Pomegranate
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by lesoleilnoire on
Sunday, 17th May 2009 @ 02:42:26 PM AEST
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| Terrific descriptive qualities. I could literally taste your poem! Great work! |
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