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Society's Poetry Society
Contributed by
theurbanpoet
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Saturday, 16th May 2009 @ 06:16:17 PM in AEST
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I met a fella who said damn boy your one 'ell of a poet,
You really know how to rhyme,
But your lyrics are way too deep man we wont make a dime,
Ha! You say you don't care much for money?,
You want your poems to be real and not funny?,
Real! Son! People dont pay to read real!,
Make people laugh and smile and we 'av a deal,
NO!
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theurbanpoet
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Re: Society's Poetry Society
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by Voice of the Silent on
Saturday, 16th May 2009 @ 08:10:38 PM AEST
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Could have been broader on the subject but I liked it. The different speech of terms you used. sounds like it could be a song but maybe that's just me reminds me of Johnny cash..hmm
anyway great poem
hope to read more soon
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Re: Society's Poetry Society
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by deadwriter on
Thursday, 25th June 2009 @ 05:55:39 AM AEST
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Excellent thoughts. The one thing I can tell you is that you have to write for YOU. Your style, your way. If people like it ok, if not, that is ok too. Your writings are what come from your heart and soul, not anyone elses. What matters most is that you enjoy what you are doing.
Keep up the great work.
Deadwriter
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