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The Final Walk
Contributed by
theurbanpoet
on
Saturday, 16th May 2009 @ 06:10:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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He put on his boots and began to walk,
To free himself from mindless talk,
No destination, no place to arrive,
This freedom and liberation in which he thrives,
Step by step as time slips away,
No better way to spend his dying day.
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theurbanpoet
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2009-05-16 18:10:16]
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Re: The Final Walk
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th May 2009 @ 06:40:09 PM AEST
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I clicked on your poem because of the author's note. I completely agree in
allowing the reader to gain their own meanings in how it pertains to them.
But this piece ... wow. There is so much emotion in so few words. I was
flooded with it, but the last line ... DAMN now that was intense!
I wasn't ready for it. (Though the title should have been a tip off, eh? :P)
Great post!
~ Breezy
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Re: The Final Walk
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by Voice of the Silent on
Saturday, 16th May 2009 @ 08:04:57 PM AEST
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I agree with breezy about the last line but my take on it is the guy walks to take his mind off the fact he's dying. I really liked the flow though it may be short but held a huge punch
great poem
hope to read more soon
-kelly |
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Re: The Final Walk
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by musicrox13 on
Saturday, 16th May 2009 @ 08:51:16 PM AEST
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| i also agree with brezzy and kelly on the last line. i loved ur poem it was a great read |
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Re: The Final Walk
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by deadwriter on
Thursday, 25th June 2009 @ 01:08:40 PM AEST
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A piece worth reading many times. Great job.
Deadwriter
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Re: The Final Walk
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by lozza15 on
Monday, 18th January 2010 @ 07:40:01 AM AEST
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i loved it
it was so powerful it had me in tears
xxxx |
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