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Blistered Souls
Contributed by
n2dep2care
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Saturday, 16th May 2009 @ 02:53:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Seething fire burn low but steadily hot
Steam rise from depths where cool release
encounter inflamed knots, and waves decompress
blistered souls
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n2dep2care
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2009-05-16 02:53:03] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Blistered Souls
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th May 2009 @ 07:48:16 PM AEST (User
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So short but you selected exactly the right words to evoke
passion and a sensual air to perfection! This is what love
must feel like on fire! I can't even begin to express the
movement which covers me in heat, from reading your
words. Magnificently emotive. Creative and impressive work!
~ Breezy
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