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My Sweet Child
Contributed by
twalk145
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Friday, 15th May 2009 @ 05:14:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My Sweet Child
I feel so much sadness
That we had such little time
But three months together
Has changed my life
I love you so strongly
Without seeing your face
I think of you only
You cannot be replaced
But I will hold you in heaven
My sweet, wonderful child
Eternally in my heart
Forever in my smile
Your mother loves you
Goodbye my sweet child
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2009-05-15 17:14:15]
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Re: My Sweet Child
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by ever1der on
Friday, 15th May 2009 @ 08:14:03 PM AEST
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| beautiful tribute to your baby. I lost a baby when he was 8 days old, so I can kind of relate. As far as technique goes, the only thing I would suggest is line breaks to make it a little stronger. Otherwise, it is beautiful. |
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Re: My Sweet Child
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by lesoleilnoire on
Friday, 15th May 2009 @ 11:28:21 PM AEST
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| I am so sorry for your loss. I can personally relate to this poem. Tears pool up in my eyes as I type this. Very emotional piece! |
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