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The Earth's Underwear
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Thursday, 14th May 2009 @ 08:18:42 PM in AEST
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The Earth is enveloped in a G-string,
never abashed he has no respect to contain.
Once reserved and dignified, now morality hangs by a string.
In the past Earth would contemplate life--now a dim lightbulb remains.
Some see the revealing garment as inviting,
but a mere tear will leave the Earth naked and bare.
Earth has taken a risk of it and morality from ever reuniting;
wearing this apparel will result in damage that cannot be repaired.
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2009-05-14 20:18:42]
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Re: The Earth's Underwear
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 16th May 2009 @ 11:30:37 PM AEST
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I understood what you were trying to convey'
I could see the image in my "minds-eye"
And you are so right about the tear too.
Poor earth has almost reached her doom.
Good way of pointing this out dear.
I enjoyed this very much
Keep up the good work!
Warm love
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Re: The Earth's Underwear
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by strawberrywine on
Saturday, 13th June 2009 @ 08:22:39 PM AEST
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| if only more people could realize what you do..........maybe our planet wouldnt be fading away....nice job! |
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