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The girl in the window
Contributed by
strawberrywine
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Thursday, 14th May 2009 @ 07:53:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Looking out the window I see a girl She seems to be lost Out in this world The sadness in her eyes Goes deep into her soul It looks like life has taken its tole To have known her earlier I wish I had Maybe then it wouldnt be so bad As the sun went down It made it easier to see That the girl outside Is just a reflection of me
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Re: The girl in the window
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by lesoleilnoire on
Thursday, 14th May 2009 @ 08:58:39 PM AEST
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| You sound like you are quite upset right now. I am currently going through the same thing. It will get better and you always have your poetry to cope. Nice job! |
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Re: The girl in the window
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 15th May 2009 @ 05:59:51 AM AEST
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Everyone gets a little lost in life sometimes, I hope that you soon find your way back onto the path of where you want to be
Steve |
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