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Can't Say No
Contributed by
razorbladekisses
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Thursday, 14th May 2009 @ 07:23:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Note: I understand that this poem is not well refined. But I felt that I needed to let it out...
Can't Say No
I don't like this
I don't like it at all
I don't want you to touch me
Don't feel me
Take your lips off of mine
Stop biting
Stop kissing
Stop
There's a lack of feeling here
Between you and I
To you I am only a girl
To me you are only a boy
You ask me
You try and tempt me
I can't say no
I can't push you away
I can't step away from you
A part of me likes it
A small piece of me wants more
You try and woo me to your desire
You whisper that you want to pleasure me
But I can't do this
It doesn't feel right
I don't like it
You do it with a false passion
I can only accept what you're doing
With false sensuality
I can't stop you
I don't want to
But I don't want you to touch me
I don't trust you
I don't trust men
I feel confused
But I know I don't want to do this
I want you off of me
Away from me
I want you to stop
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2009-05-14 19:23:58]
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Re: Can't Say No
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by MoonlightKiss on
Friday, 15th May 2009 @ 09:35:14 AM AEST
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oh my god this was so good. i wrote a poem similar to this.
this also reminds me of 'Good Enough' by Evanescence. one of the verses is...
"Under your spell again
I can't say no to you..."
anyway, i loved it. great job, even without refining it. i write alot of those and sometimes they just come out pretty dang good! |
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Re: Can't Say No
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th September 2009 @ 12:09:44 PM AEST
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I felt your pain. What a horrible situation to be in.
-Phil |
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Re: Can't Say No
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by The_Unknown on
Friday, 16th April 2010 @ 11:20:23 AM AEST
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I must agree with Phil... I can feel your pain and confusion.
It IS a bad situation to be in.
It makes me feel weak, reading this. It's a wonderful poem, though.
Love,
TU |
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