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Fate's Feathered Friend
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
on
Wednesday, 13th May 2009 @ 08:49:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Taking a Spring drive on a whispy windy day,
I am entranced by the peaceful puffy clouds.
This moment depicts life's Utopian ways;
just then time stops and I witness a flash of scarlet and black flap its wings loudly.
Fate gave this musical-winged wonder another chance;
my heart is pounding, and my senses are relaxing.
I ponder how I would have ever again danced,
if death came thrashing.
The red-winged faery would give me night terrors;
I would cry a cureless sea of sorrow.
For fate has its way of rejecting errors;
unfortunately, fate is spontaneous--not borrowed.
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lesoleilnoire
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2009-05-13 20:49:17]
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Re: Fate's Feathered Friend
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 13th May 2009 @ 09:27:24 PM AEST
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I am happy the beautiful bird did not perish on the front of your car. Exciting write and the ending a good wise note.
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Re: Fate's Feathered Friend
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Thursday, 14th May 2009 @ 05:53:13 AM AEST
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I remember when I thought I had hit a bird on the way home once.
I couldn't tell what had happened to it as it glanced off the edge of the windscreen, but I was thinking about it for days
Steve |
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