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Rainbow bridge to heaven
Contributed by
shanat
on
Tuesday, 12th May 2009 @ 06:02:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Finaly, the words are comming through
sit here and write thats all i can do
create a world on paper in 1 hour
then write a poem about a black widow flower
i`ve written with the stars and drank from a fountain
took a wizards advice and climbed the biggest mountain
sat at dawn in a white lilly pond
humed along with the frogs to a white lilly song
the galaxy underwater and moon above the ridge
brings us here, to the rainbow bridge
the colours of the rainbow together there are 7
i`ll see you all tommorrow
in another perfect day in heaven:)
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shanat
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2009-05-12 18:02:31]
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Re: Rainbow bridge to heaven
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by lesoleilnoire on
Tuesday, 12th May 2009 @ 08:53:40 PM AEST
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| Nice job! I like the imagery you use in your poem a lot! Terrific! |
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Re: Rainbow bridge to heaven
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 12th May 2009 @ 11:05:12 PM AEST
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Perfectly put together write, lovely images and just a super write.
the galazy underwater and the moon above the ridge........ love it love it!
Hugs
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Re: Rainbow bridge to heaven
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by Lilymaemax on
Wednesday, 13th May 2009 @ 08:47:10 AM AEST
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| I just love this very tolkienesque!!!You painted a beautiful picture with your words.Lilymae |
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Re: Rainbow bridge to heaven
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by Starchild7 on
Tuesday, 13th October 2009 @ 03:11:56 PM AEST
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Such beautiful imagery here what a lovely piece, thank you for sharing really enjoyed it:)
Starchild |
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