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Contributed by aweav2008 on Tuesday, 12th May 2009 @ 05:39:18 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I dont know what to do, i dont know what to say
All i know is that i can not stand another day
Trapped inside this ***** up world people love to see
The only true world i know is one of you and me
Theres just to much bull*****, to much crap to handle
When you are taken from my life, i see a flicker of my candle
Freinds come and go its said but it is true
All i can do is pray nothing comes between me and you
Without you in my life i become an empty shell
The angesl fall from heaven and i am surrounded in this hell
I doubt youll ever know how truly important you are
The day you finally leave me will make to deep of a scar
Trapped inside this limbo between whats wrong and right
But honestly im so tired, i can never win the fight.
I hope however you find trests you even better than him
For any man that dosent should be torn limb from limb
I guess what im trying to say is that deep down i love you so
Its just a ***** shame youll never truly know
So for know i put down my pen and rest my hand for the night
But until the day you realize how i feel my world will never be right

Copyright © aweav2008 ... [ 2009-05-12 17:39:18]
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Re: You (User Rating: 1 )
by shanat on Tuesday, 12th May 2009 @ 06:07:41 PM AEST
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Deep, thats all i can say deep.
im with you my friend!
shanat:)

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