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Let Life's Modern Holy Water Be My Guide
Contributed by
27darryl27
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Tuesday, 12th May 2009 @ 09:55:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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... And the bottle said
"In vino veritas", cheers,
Here's to the next glass..
Copyright ©
27darryl27
... [
2009-05-12 09:55:18]
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Re: Let Life's Modern Holy Water Be My Guide
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 12th May 2009 @ 12:36:08 PM AEST
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'in aqua sanitas'
alcohol offers no verity but intoxication. i liked how you fitted so much into such a short passage. i think it is the greatest haiku i have ever read. 5/5.
-Phil
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Re: Let Life's Modern Holy Water Be My Guide
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 12th May 2009 @ 02:04:37 PM AEST
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Well done...
Jenni |
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Re: Let Life's Modern Holy Water Be My Guide
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by musicrox13 on
Tuesday, 12th May 2009 @ 05:06:33 PM AEST
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| well written good read |
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