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You Said.......
Contributed by
argenismichael
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Tuesday, 12th May 2009 @ 01:05:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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i once said i loved you but did i mean it?
It was you who saw me first going down that staircase, now your only his case. Its your face that i see every morning when i awake and your face i see in my midnight sake. How could this happen to us, we were meant to be or at least thats what i could only see. I once married you a thousand times. We were at the la times cursing around, listing to some benni benassi and feeling so sassy. We drove up to that hollywood sign, but now I have no to recline. you said you cared about me and that you would always be here for me now is only a matter of time before you kiss him in front of me. You were the apple of my eye but now your just that sty that bothered my clear vision and now im in a collision.
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Re: You Said.......
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 12th May 2009 @ 04:54:59 AM AEST
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a mixture of scattered images and emotions. i found it powerful, good work.
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Re: You Said.......
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 12th May 2009 @ 10:56:10 PM AEST
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Twists and emotional turns in this verse.
Nicely done.
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