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A small take of what I think of it all

Contributed by Voice of the Silent on Monday, 11th May 2009 @ 08:11:40 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



This is just a small take of what I think of many things none of which are explained with much reason I just felt the need to vent so here you are.

Here's my take on it all

Everyone in my eyes
Is a criminal and always lies
There's are three kinds of people on this earth
The people who want to live life for it's worth
The kind of people who take on depression and all for self blame
And the rarest of all the people who just want to watch the world go up in flames

People seem to think that what they have is what they are
Always defined by their phones cloths and their cars
People can't see
That what makes a person is the personality

People could just let everyone be
But no people want action they want controversy
They can't just live and let live

Their are so many questions and not enough time
And that not right in my mind
But somebody will know it all
And then I think he/she will be the one to watch the earth fall

If you have that one person that want to lie
And be by your side
Saying they love you why cry?
Why would you think of suicide?
Everyone
Has someone

There is one last thing
That I want to preach and sing
You people who prey for a better tomorrow
Stop worrying about it what does it matter if it brings everyone sorrow
You've lived this far in life I must say you can make it another day

This is a very short summary of my intake of a lot that happens to be it all
But I can't tell you how much more there is
A part of my take on life is here
What’s yours?




Copyright © Voice of the Silent ... [ 2009-05-11 20:11:40]
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Re: A small take of what I think of it all (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 12th May 2009 @ 06:12:20 AM AEST
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you talk a lot of sense and cut out the bull. refreshing work once again.

-Phil




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