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Straight Jacket
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Monday, 11th May 2009 @ 08:09:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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My soul is enshrouded in a straight-jacket;
I pull against an indestructible force field.
My sanity is imprisoned in a packet;
I long for these perpetual wounds to be healed.
My consciousness is in a hypnotic state;
I try to resist the swirling whirlpools of life.
My reality stabs my heart like a knife;
I must break free from this confined form.
My freedom will make me reborn.
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2009-05-11 20:09:39]
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Re: Straight Jacket
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by Voice of the Silent on
Monday, 11th May 2009 @ 08:15:04 PM AEST
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You said it was phycotic poetry. I can't help but laugh at that for I can't think of anything as such because I think of myself as phycotic so to me it's just poetry.
Your's by the way is excellent i liked it. We can't help but go with the flow of life because in a game of tug a war it wins almost always
Hope to read more soon
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Re: Straight Jacket
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 12th May 2009 @ 06:14:16 AM AEST
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not bad. not bad at all. keep on writing, I'll be intrigued to see some more of your work.
-Phil |
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Re: Straight Jacket
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by Ambivalence on
Tuesday, 12th May 2009 @ 10:01:11 PM AEST
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u've expressed urself in a very sane way, it's a great write, and dont think ur crazy cuz we all experience this unfortunately. love the use of imagery, very effective! great job, take care
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