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The love I left behind
Contributed by
Nabahood23
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Monday, 11th May 2009 @ 03:01:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Sweetheart, I just want to let you know.
I am reminded of you where ever I go.
I constantly think of my love I left behind.
Memories of you are always on my mind.
Often I think of the marvelous joy.
That comes the moment I open home’s front door.
I imagine the excitement of seeing you again.
The wonderful joy returning home to you will bring.
I dream of tenderly holding hands with you.
I can almost hear that funny laugh that you do,
Every time you see something funny on TV,
While sitting on the couch watching a movie.
I wish that I could be right there somehow.
I crave to hold you in my arms right now.
I desire to express my deep love for you.
I need to hear you say, ‘Honey I love you, too.’
Memories of you always linger on my mind.
I yearn for my precious love I left behind.
Sweetheart, sometimes it is hard for me to wait,
Upon the day I get to come home to my soul mate.
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Nabahood23
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2009-05-11 15:01:12] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The love I left behind
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 12th May 2009 @ 06:30:59 AM AEST (User
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maybe needed some more commas in certain places to assist fluency, but a good effort.
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