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When
Contributed by
chickenhead
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Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 12:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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When I saw you
I was scared to talk
When I first talk to you
I was scared to kiss you
When I first kissed you
I was scared to say love you
Now that I love you
I am scared to lose you
Copyright ©
chickenhead
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2003-03-27 00:45:00]
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Re: When
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by XXXsilvervoodooXXX on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 02:08:45 AM AEST
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| yup... isn't that just how it goes.. good write. |
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Re: When
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 08:10:31 AM AEST
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Great poem!! It is amazing how much can be said in so few words. You expressed your amotions beautifully and I am sure a lot of people can relate to this.
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Re: When
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 09:53:57 AM AEST
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you managed in a few lines to state how most relationships go. Good write
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Re: When
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 05:22:32 PM AEST
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| this seems to be the words of someone else. I am sure I read this before,on a url. |
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Re: When
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by AngryPrincess on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 01:42:04 AM AEST
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i think i read it on a url too...weird....interesting
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