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Hooked
Contributed by
MoonlightKiss
on
Monday, 11th May 2009 @ 12:47:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
obsession
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Lost in your piercing eyes again
I can't believe that I'm so hooked on you
And my heart is hard to mend
My mind says no, but my body's hooked too
You make me feel like I'm falling; when will I hit?
Shouldn't have let you torture me; now I crave it
And I'm so hooked on how you touch me
So addicted to how your lips feel on mine
I don't mind that I'm yours; I'm not truly free
Holding your hand; we don't walk between each line.
Caught up on how your fingers feel on my skin
I can't believe that I'm hooked on you
And I know that what you're doing is a sin
It's so risky, yet so erotic too
You make me feel like I'm runing, but going nowhere
Shouldn't have let you dominate me
But I can't help being so susceptible when you stare...
And I'm so hooked on this
Every moment, it's your love I miss
I'm completely hooked on you
But there's nothing I want to do.
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MoonlightKiss
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2009-05-11 12:47:36]
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Re: Hooked
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by Voice of the Silent on
Monday, 11th May 2009 @ 02:11:20 PM AEST
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Great write. Our loved ones can become some what of a drug to where we can't live without them if we want to or not
again great write
hope to read more soon
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Re: Hooked
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 12th May 2009 @ 06:36:07 AM AEST
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very sensual, erotic and sexual. a wholly passionate write, great work.
-Phil |
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