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Basement
Contributed by
polaris773
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Monday, 11th May 2009 @ 10:33:10 AM in AEST
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Alone in this basement
I lay,
A guest, more than a stranger
Less than a friend, a guest
In this cold unfinished basement
Me and the cats sleep
Fighting over there bed I stole from them
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2009-05-11 10:33:10]
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Re: Basement
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by thumper on
Monday, 11th May 2009 @ 09:47:32 PM AEST
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I feel this. I hope it isn't real life for you. Just something you wrote? It is short and succinct. But paints a very lonely picture. :o( Good Job!
Peace to ya
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Re: Basement
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 12th May 2009 @ 07:36:19 AM AEST
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good stuff.
-Phil |
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