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The Sound of:
Contributed by
xnoybis
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Monday, 11th May 2009 @ 12:52:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The sound of
Cruising over motionless water
at midnight
With only the moon
to differentiate planes
The clinical zen-like feeling
Of feeling nothing at all
Not because you don't want to
Because it's the right thing to feel
in the right moment
This is a feeling unto itself
This is a place for nobody else
but us.
The sound of
us coming together
Effortless.
Copyright ©
xnoybis
... [
2009-05-11 00:52:13] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Sound of:
(User Rating: 1 ) by fredmonte101 on
Saturday, 18th October 2014 @ 05:56:05 AM AEST (User
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Well it does give a picture to me and is well written, Yet the philosophy of feeling nothing at all leaves it somewhat flat for me. But that is me. |
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