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Final Farewell
Contributed by
thewizard
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Sunday, 10th May 2009 @ 03:39:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I climb the steps, slowly glancing back
As I board, the waiting train
You're a silhouette, in rising mist
Knowing, I'll never see you again
If only I could hold your hand
I'd take you, to our special place
Looking through the window
A tear, rolls down my face
All aboard, a station guard shouts
His shrill voice, echo's above
The train slowly pulls away
The final departure my love
I wave, a fond farewell
As I fight back the tears
Slowly fading, into darkened night
On a journey, of unknown fears
The last thing, I'll remember
As the station, we slowly depart
Knowing, you loved me
Deep within your heart
Copyright ©
thewizard
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2009-05-10 03:39:52]
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Re: Final Farewell
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by The_Phantom on
Sunday, 10th May 2009 @ 05:00:03 PM AEST
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Very nice a touching write I really enjoyed the read.
The Phantom |
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Re: Final Farewell
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by thumper on
Monday, 11th May 2009 @ 08:55:59 PM AEST
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I, too, enjoyed the read. Nice R&R. I will seek out more of your writes. :o}
Peace to ya!
Thumper ;o) |
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